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Near
November 27th, 2007, 06:01 PM
Just something I wrote up on the computer. It explains the corruption of man in my own perspective. Enjoy. x3

The Light, The Shadow, and the Dark:

Light; The force that made the world bright. The Light that shines so dearly,
from the Sun and Our God, the Heavenly Father.

In time, man said, "Light does not come from God but from the Sun," and many believed it so. "There is no such thing as 'God'" Man laughed. "He is a fable like all the others, nothing but another pagan god."

Thus, this created Shade, the shadow that covered Man's once-good heart.
The Shade made Men hate Light. "You say we are hypocrits?" Shade mocked. "But, if we are the hypocrit, where is your Almighty God? The one who will reign over You for many years to come?"

Yet Light did not get angered. Light said, "God does not need to show Himself to you yet...the time is not right."

And Shade laughed, saying, "God is not a god...he is your imagination. He will not show himself because he simply does not exist."

And Shade soon spread, and some of the Light ceased.

And then the Dark came, with it's evil beauty and lovely temptations. But Dark said otherwise, "If God does exist, why doesn't He come down to talk to us? Why doesn't He strike us dead? He may exist, but do you call that a god?" And Light became angered by the Dark.

The Dark soon engulfed many hearts...it had many followers. It hurt Light and many times killed its people. And Light went to God saying, "Oh, Father, why do you let the corrupted speak vile about Your Name? Why do you not put them to their Judgement and strike them all dead? Why have you not chained the devil to the eternal fire in hell?"

But God was patient and said, "The time is not yet to destroy them. Wait a little longer and when the time is right I will call you to the Day of Judgement." continued....

I hope you liked it. This was out of pure passion. I have observed human nature many times, and I feel as if God has asked me to write this poem for my fellow followers. I find it beautiful. :) Part 2 is coming soon...you may see some elements from Revelation in there.

Near
November 27th, 2007, 08:18 PM
Does anyone like it? >_>