ChildOJesus
July 16th, 2007, 08:48 AM
Well, I gave it my very best with this song lyric. Even though I'm a newbie guitar player, I know exactly how it should sound and how the melody goes. I only need to learn the chords (On guitar, out loud) which exist only in my head. So go ahead and let me know what you think, please! It's one of the first songs I ever wrote.:)
THE THOUGHT GARDEN
Verse 1
In the thought garden
I am wandering free
Through tangled bushes
Made from clumsy dreams
Walk around, feel around
There's the deepest clean sensation pouring out of me
Verse 2
In the thought garden
There's a passionate wave
Moves me through the streams
Near the garden gate
Look around, all I see is mine
There's a bold inspiration and I know that it's right
Chorus
The thought garden trips me up inside
It's a dreamers wish another way to fly
The thought garden keeps me up at night
While I close my eyes my mind is open wide
Verse 3
In the thought garden
Words are taking their time
There are flowery hopes
But the weeds are growing high
Walk around, move around
There's a new destination makes me feel so alive
Verse 4
In the thought garden
Watch me wander away
Every word's an image
I can see what I say
In the thought garden there's a glorious breeze
Weeding out the wants and then sowing in the needs
Chorus
The thought garden trips me up inside
It's a dreamers wish another waste of time
The thought garden keeps me up at night
While I close my eyes my mind is open wide
Bridge
Everything's in shambles hopes are tangled up in dreams
Thought's are deep and shallow hopes are empty then they're deep
Never seen such beauty, oh it's really such a scene
I'm looking for an answer that won't mean anything
Verse 5
In the thought garden there's a secret door
Words are all around me as a mirror brings me more
They tell me where I'm going till I'm not there anymore
Thought's are open to me they reflect me to the core
Feel around, bring me 'round
There's emotion on the ground and it's flying overhead
It's pounding in my heart and it's filling me with dread
Chorus
The thought garden trips me up inside
It's a dreamers wish another way to fly
The thought garden keeps me up at night
While I close my eyes my mind is open wide
I'm looking for an answer that won't mean anything...
© Copyright The Thought Garden
™/ F.W.Holden. 2005
All Rights Reserved.
THE THOUGHT GARDEN
Verse 1
In the thought garden
I am wandering free
Through tangled bushes
Made from clumsy dreams
Walk around, feel around
There's the deepest clean sensation pouring out of me
Verse 2
In the thought garden
There's a passionate wave
Moves me through the streams
Near the garden gate
Look around, all I see is mine
There's a bold inspiration and I know that it's right
Chorus
The thought garden trips me up inside
It's a dreamers wish another way to fly
The thought garden keeps me up at night
While I close my eyes my mind is open wide
Verse 3
In the thought garden
Words are taking their time
There are flowery hopes
But the weeds are growing high
Walk around, move around
There's a new destination makes me feel so alive
Verse 4
In the thought garden
Watch me wander away
Every word's an image
I can see what I say
In the thought garden there's a glorious breeze
Weeding out the wants and then sowing in the needs
Chorus
The thought garden trips me up inside
It's a dreamers wish another waste of time
The thought garden keeps me up at night
While I close my eyes my mind is open wide
Bridge
Everything's in shambles hopes are tangled up in dreams
Thought's are deep and shallow hopes are empty then they're deep
Never seen such beauty, oh it's really such a scene
I'm looking for an answer that won't mean anything
Verse 5
In the thought garden there's a secret door
Words are all around me as a mirror brings me more
They tell me where I'm going till I'm not there anymore
Thought's are open to me they reflect me to the core
Feel around, bring me 'round
There's emotion on the ground and it's flying overhead
It's pounding in my heart and it's filling me with dread
Chorus
The thought garden trips me up inside
It's a dreamers wish another way to fly
The thought garden keeps me up at night
While I close my eyes my mind is open wide
I'm looking for an answer that won't mean anything...
© Copyright The Thought Garden
™/ F.W.Holden. 2005
All Rights Reserved.