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Inprayer
July 29th, 2007, 08:45 AM
The Sinners Prayer.

When you are chained in darkness,
or lost to a mighty fear..

Remember to call for Jesus Christ and he will soon come near.

It really doesn't matter, if you're strong or weak,

When you call him he will come, for he's the one you seek.

Perhaps you can't explain it with fancy words or thoughts.

But Jesus Christ will save you from all the troubles you have wrought.

As time goes on you'll change and you'll become his friend

And he will counsel constantly and help your soul to mend.

When it's time to meet your maker, you'll go with joy to him

He'll call you son or daughter and will invite you to come in.



I think the simplicity of this poem would lend itself to music. Too bad I can't play a note! :doh

Sydney Spider
July 30th, 2007, 09:38 AM
:wave I love your poem and I've composed a tune in my head to go with it! The song was floating around in my mind as I went to sleep last night. :hug :choir

Inprayer
July 30th, 2007, 11:08 AM
Oh thats wonderful. I'm a frustrated musician. Can write, paint and sculpt. But call me fumble fingers when it comes to instruments. This poem isn't like most of my work. It came to me in the middle of the night and almost wrote itself. I love it because its like a song to me... Love to hear what you come up with.